Παρασκευή, 8 Νοεμβρίου 2019

My trip

My boat is made
of words

My paddle is made
of feelings

My anchor is made
of thoughts

My trip  begins
from my hand

My trip is lasting
as long as your reading

My trip never ends
while your hearts feel the same

The same is forever

Yannis Politopoulos

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  1. I believe your trip never will end. You have a lot of good words with full of thoughts and feelings. That´s way you are the poet.

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  2. Your trip will last forever in my thoughts...so deeply touching...and incredibly beautiful!❤

    Have a super weekend!😊😊 xxx

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  3. The written word and the reading of it...how pwerful and beautiful it can be.
    I enjoy your writings very much 💮

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  4. Hola, Yannis. Pues te deseo de corazón, que ese viaje, en ese delicado bote de las palabras, sea infinito, así, como esa inspirada y bella forma de escribir que tienes, con la que consigues, que sea siempre, un placer leerte.
    Un fuerte abrazo, amigo.

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  5. __ Yannis, you've presented a grand inspiration to my minimal and parallel senryu below, thank you! _m

    my hands lift
    that anchor of each course
    pencil's sail

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  6. hello Yannis
    always your beautiful and sensitive words !
    hope you are well

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  7. Wundervolle, wahrlich inspirierende Verse, lieber Yannis.
    Möge deine Reise stets glücklich und sicher sein.

    Alles Liebe,
    isabella

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  8. Very nice poem, Yannis, although I have automatically translated it.
    Greetings from Spain :)

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  9. Travel can be immortal;
    Dreams never die.
    Good continuation of the week.

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